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Mam napisać rozprawkę na temat : coraz więcej rodzin decyduje się na kształcenie dzieci w domu.Napisz rozprawkę przedstawiającą wady i zalety takiego rozwiązania.Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie .Wiem ,że na pewno popełniłam dużo błędów.
Today is very popular houseschooling.Many people decide to teach their children at home.It is believed that kids will be smarter and will get to a better University.Is it a good idea or not?This idea can be said to have both advantages and disadvantages.
One advantage is that children whose parents teach at home can learn subjects many times.
Secondly is a good idea for a children who are self -conscious.They will be less stressed becuse homeschooling reduces stress.
Thirdly children are more creative and imaginative at home than at school because they are less worried about making mistakes.Homeschooling builds also confidence.Moreover homeschooling is a good idea for families who live in a place,where it is far to the nearest school. Children who learn at home ,aren't distracted by sounds or friends. Finally is a good idea for small children because they aren't petrified when their parents leave them at school.On the other hand kids that learn at home don't have many friends because most of us meet friends at school.They will have more problem with communication and life than kids ,who go to the school.Moreover children who are learn at home aren't prepared to work in a grups.
To sun up I think that homeschooling is a good idea although it also have disadvantages.Children whose parents learn them at home are smarter because they aren't distracted by classmates and kids aren't stressed by their classmates but it appears that the most important skill is communication.Already school is a place where children teach not only subject but also how to live in a society.

 

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Oto moja wersja tej rozprawki. Mam nadzieję, że to tak dla treningu i że nie macie limitu słów Jakby co to mogę to skrócić.

P.S. Tylko nie wiem, czy dobrze rozumiem koncept uczenia dzieci w domu

Civilizational progress is something we cannot fight with. With the evolution of our cultural system, we are being continously introduced to new ideas such as homeschooling. It's important to note that learning children at home has become very popular and more and more parents decide to give it a shot. Most people believe that traditional education is somewhat inferior to the new system and that it won't provide them with knowledge and skills needed to graduate from a good University, which is considered to be necessary in starting a succesful career.

Is it true? Is learning children at home really the best option or should we ignore the modern trends and send our kids to school?

First of all, homeschooling relies on a direct interaction between the tutor and the student, which allows the teacher to monitor the progress of his pupil more closely and thus choose the best way of explaining the most difficult topics. Moreover, it allows the children to easily advance through the things they find easy and focus on the ones they have troubles with. This way they don't have to spend countless hours on repeating and training the things they already know. Another great advantage of homeschooling is the fact that staying at home greatly reduces stress connected with education and provides a familiar and friendly environment, where children are not being distracted by noise and other kids like they are in a typical school. Kids can take a break whenever they feel tired, or eat home made food whenever they feel hungry - it's a big difference from a typical school where kids have a set schedule and often buy unhealthy food. It's also a good solution for the parents, because they can monitor the progress of their kids more closely. Another great thing about homeschooling is that it doesn't require the kids to spend a lot of time getting to and from school, which is mostly important in cases when there are no good schools near their home.

As great as it may sound, homeschooling also has its disadvantages. One of the biggest issues is that the children who have been taught at home often tend to have social skills developed inadequately to their age. Kids who are going to school are more experienced in meeting new people, making friends and keeping them. They are also more outgoing and cheerful then the homeschooled kids, who often tend to be introvertics and, due to the lack of friends, have a greater chance of developing adolescent forms of depression. Moreover, learning at home doesn't require working in groups. While it allows the children to work idividually, it also hurts their ability to work with other people, which is one of the most important traits in most jobs. Moreover, homeschooling also hurts the physical development of the kids. Some scientific sources claim that the homeschooled kids lack proper exercise and thus are in the risk group for civilizational ilnesses, such as obesity or atherosclerosis. Last, but not least, home learning is much more expensive than going to school, since you need to hire a good tutor to be sure that your child receives proper education.

To sum things up - homeschooling definetely allows the children to learn faster and more efficient, but it also hurts their overall development. Personally, I believe that sending kids to school and keeping a close eye on their progress by attending meetings with the teachers and making sure the children work at home is better than homescholing, because it provides similar level of education without hurting the social skills of the kids.

 

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