In the picture we can see Santa Claus sitting on his sleigh, who is about to leave little girls house (I guess he had just delivered gifts) but she came off and is giving him an apple. Santa is wearing red coat with hood with white border and white gloves. He has long, white beard and moustache. His sleigh are full of gifts, we can see teddy bears, dolls, bells, some instruments and many wrapped presents. The girl, who is standing behind the sleigh has blond hair and is wearing green nightdress. In one hand she is holding the candle and in the other she has an apple that she is giving to Santa. In the background we can see the wooden house (probably the girls house) with opened door through which we see Christmas tree in the inside. In the windows on the right we can see lighted candles. The whole scene is completed by trees covered with white snow.hejmógłby mi ktoś opisać ten obrazek po angielsku? z góry dziękujęPokaż załącznik: 34299
Że niby błędy mi poprawiasz? To co zaznaczyłaś/poprawiłaś nie jest błędem, a jedynie dopuszczalnym skrótem myślowym.In the picture we can see Santa Claus sitting on his sleigh, who is about to leave little girls house (I guess he had just delivered gifts) but she came off and she is giving him an apple. Santa is wearing red coat with hood with white border and white gloves. He has long, white beard and moustache. His sleigh are full of gifts, we can see teddy bears, dolls, bells, some instruments and many wrapped presents. The girl, who is standing behind the sleigh has blond hair and she is wearing green nightdress. In one hand she is holding the candle and in the other she has an apple that she is giving to Santa. In the background we can see the wooden house (probably the girls house) with opened door through which we see Christmas tree inside. In the windows on the right we can see lighted candles. The whole scene is completed by trees covered with white snow.
Ja nie twierdzę, że to jest źle, po prostu nauczyciel może się do tego przyczepić, że zamiast she is jest is Nie każdy toleruje skrótów, mi kiedyś babka powiedziała, że w pracach szkolnych mam używać you, a nie u, bo tak przeważnie piszę ;]Że niby błędy mi poprawiasz? To co zaznaczyłaś/poprawiłaś nie jest błędem, a jedynie dopuszczalnym skrótem myślowym.
To jest akurat oczywiste, bo "U" zamiast "You" albo "R" zamiast "are" to można do kogoś na giegie napisać albo w esemesie, a nie w pracy szkolnej.mi kiedyś babka powiedziała, że w pracach szkolnych mam używać you, a nie u, bo tak przeważnie piszę ;]