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Ma to być historyjka, w ktorej kogoś ratuję.
W podręczniku jest taki przykład:
1. Setting the Scene
One Staurday afternoon, I was taking Patch, my dog, for a walk by the river. It was a beautiful, sunny day. Some people were fishing and others were sunbathing. I was watching some children playing on the bridge. Suddenly, a little boy fell in the river
2. Development of the Narrative
I knew I had to do something. First, I gave my dog to a woman. Then, I jumped into the water and swam towards the boy. Meanwhile, somebody phoned for the emergency services. When I grabbed the boy, he pulled me down so I let go of him. As I was swimming to the side, I saw Patch jump into the water and pull the boy to safety!
3. Conclusion
While they were taking the boy away in an ambulance, I could see people pointing at me. In the end, a police officer came up to me and thanked me. A few days later, I went to the police station and they gave me a certificate for bravery - and Patch got one too!
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Dostałam taką treść:
`Jak nie wiesz o czym napisać, to napisz, że szedłem do swojej pięknej dziewczyny, kiedy zauważyłem, że mój kolega zmierza przed siebie zaczytany w jakąś książkę. I zatrzymuję go, żeby nie wpadł do studzienki kanalizacyjnej (nie wiem, czy to nie za trudne słowo jak na j. angielski :| )
Ewentualnie może być jakiś dół.`
Gdyby ktoś był w stanie pomóc...
Będę wdzięczna.
W podręczniku jest taki przykład:
1. Setting the Scene
One Staurday afternoon, I was taking Patch, my dog, for a walk by the river. It was a beautiful, sunny day. Some people were fishing and others were sunbathing. I was watching some children playing on the bridge. Suddenly, a little boy fell in the river
2. Development of the Narrative
I knew I had to do something. First, I gave my dog to a woman. Then, I jumped into the water and swam towards the boy. Meanwhile, somebody phoned for the emergency services. When I grabbed the boy, he pulled me down so I let go of him. As I was swimming to the side, I saw Patch jump into the water and pull the boy to safety!
3. Conclusion
While they were taking the boy away in an ambulance, I could see people pointing at me. In the end, a police officer came up to me and thanked me. A few days later, I went to the police station and they gave me a certificate for bravery - and Patch got one too!
---
Dostałam taką treść:
`Jak nie wiesz o czym napisać, to napisz, że szedłem do swojej pięknej dziewczyny, kiedy zauważyłem, że mój kolega zmierza przed siebie zaczytany w jakąś książkę. I zatrzymuję go, żeby nie wpadł do studzienki kanalizacyjnej (nie wiem, czy to nie za trudne słowo jak na j. angielski :| )
Ewentualnie może być jakiś dół.`
Gdyby ktoś był w stanie pomóc...
Będę wdzięczna.