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[Sephiorth]

a wiec prosił bym bardzo o sprawdzenie tego listu. Jest on skierownay do gazety Format, pisze o modzie i ubiorze.

Dear Fashion Format,
I am wrting to enquire about where can I buy nice clothes? Could you please tell me about fashion. How I am should clothes in our times? What do you think about buying clothes from Internet? Better buying clothes in shop or some think ?
I am 19 years old and i have some questions. I have looking for new fashion clothes but i don't know what in our times is trendy. How I have been clothes?
And last questions I don't know what I have compose clothes.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
your Faithfully
XYZ

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Tez moje pytanie brzmi gdzie stosowac akapity.I przy sprawdzaniu jak macie jakas mysl to mozecie jakies nowe zdanie dodac
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[aekw]

a wiec prosił bym bardzo o sprawdzenie tego listu. Jest on skierownay do gazety Format, pisze o modzie i ubiorze.

Dear Fashion Format,
I am wrting to enquire about where can I buy nice clothes? Could you please tell me about fashion. How I am should clothes in our times? What do you think about buying clothes from Internet? Better buying clothes in shop or some think ?
I am 19 years old and i have some questions. I have looking for new fashion clothes but i don't know what in our times is trendy. How I have been clothes?
And last questions I don't know what I have compose clothes.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
your Faithfully
XYZ

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Tez moje pytanie brzmi gdzie stosowac akapity.I przy sprawdzaniu jak macie jakas mysl to mozecie jakies nowe zdanie dodac
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Dear Sir/Madamme,
I am writting to you to enquire about where can I buy nice clothes? It is veri interesting for me and I will be greatefull to know your opinion.
I am 19 years old and i have some questions, because I want to look nice and trendy. It is very important for every teenage. Could you please tell me something about the fashion,please? What do you think about buying clothes by Internet, because I have heard that it is not good. We can buy some clothes too big or toosmal by Internet. We have to try it on before we decide to buy any clothes. Better is buying clothes in shop or diferent places? I have looking for new fashion clothes but i don't know what is trendy in our times. The fashion is changing now all the time! It is too complicated for me. And the last questions I don't know how to compose clothes.
I look forward to hearing from you
your Faithfully
XYZ




Akapit jak masz nowa odrebna mysl i przy poczatku, w rozwinieciu i na koncu:

To whome it may concern,
I am writing(typowy poczatek-napominasz o czym jest list i w jakiej sprawie)..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Zaczynasz pisac tresc wlasciwa czyli sedno sprawy, rozwiniecie.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I am looking forward to hearing from you
uour sincerely
xyz

 

[Sephiorth]

mozesz mi powiedziec co znaczy ten zwrot ??
We can buy some clothes too big or toosmal by Internet. We have to try it on before we decide to buy any clothes

 

[aekw]

mozesz mi powiedziec co znaczy ten zwrot ??
We can buy some clothes too big or toosmal by Internet. We have to try it on before we decide to buy any clothes

We can buy some clothes too big or too smal by Internet. We have to try it on before we decide to buy any clothes
mOZEMY KUPIC NIEKTORE UBRANIA ZA DUZE LUB ZA MALE PRZEZ INTERNET. MUSIMY JE MIERZYC ZANIM ZDECYDUJEMY JE KUPIC.

 

[Sephiorth]

dzieki bardzo, na moje rozumowanie wychodzilo cos innego